About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could

be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____

pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____

University.

The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal

Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____

within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____

families to moderate size.

This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal

deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____

the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control

respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____

risk categories.

The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____

maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____

pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____

mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____

two years apart.

參考答案及解析:

1 將had used 改為 used。

因?yàn)榇司涫翘摂M語氣，表示與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，故條件從句中應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)。例如：

Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 許多人原本會(huì)成為聰明人-如果他們不自以為聰明的話。

2 將publishing改為published

report和publish時(shí)邏輯動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故應(yīng)使用publish的過去分詞短語來修飾report。例如：

Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的發(fā)現(xiàn)，不管多么微不足道，都將成為知識(shí)寶庫中的一部分。

3 將theirs改為their

4 將among改為between

在兩次懷孕期間留出足夠的間隔時(shí)間，故用between。

5 將過去分詞excluded改為介詞excluding。

excluding意為“不包括…”

6 將respectably改為respectively

respectively 意為 “分別地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意為 “可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。

7將evidences改為evidence。

evidence是不可數(shù)名詞。

8將ill改為illness。

9將year改為years。

10將lesser改為less

編輯推薦：

英語英語專業(yè)八級(jí)改錯(cuò)命題分析應(yīng)試技

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